Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:50pm
Regarding entry #99
Sorry Wrong spot...lol, It was meant for the Collar Style logo!
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:49pm
Regarding entry #99
Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:46pm
Regarding entry #95
Fire meets water
Memili
Jul 17, 6:54pm
General Message
Mahalo (thank you) to everyone who submitted designs to this competition. The creativity we've seen is tremendous. We will convene our committee and come to a decision in a few days. Aloha
psat0
Jul 17, 4:03pm
Regarding entry #102
I am glad you like the logo. I submitted a version with the flipped arrow.
pentacreative
Jul 17, 10:20am
General Message
The client has extended the contest
guru
Jul 16, 5:41pm
Regarding entry #42
Sure I posted an Update on the Board, you can check it out. I actually posted 3 different kinds. Let me know what you think about them. Thank you for the feedback!
fmgraphics
Jul 15, 9:37pm
Regarding entry #102
Great choice of colors! Would you mind flipping the arrow in hawai'i so that it turns the opposite way, still with the skinny part at the top?
psat0
Jul 15, 8:11pm
Regarding entry #51
Just posted a bolder look.
pentacreative
Jul 15, 11:12am
Regarding entry #50
Just posted a new version
pentacreative
Jul 15, 11:11am
Regarding entry #89
I feel happy that you liked Logo #89, thanks a lot.
vsalian
Jul 15, 9:07am
Regarding entry #89
This is very nice! Thank you for offering this design.
psat0
Jul 15, 3:39am
Regarding entry #74
Is there anything you would suggest I change?
SunriseStudios
Jul 14, 10:07am
Regarding entry #68
Making few changes and sending
vsalian
Jul 14, 4:15am
Regarding entry #77
This is pretty cool! Thank you.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:38am
Regarding entry #10
One minor comment is changing the glottal stop in Hawai'i to be the same color as the word. And maybe trying a version with brown instead of the purplish color just to see what that would look like. thank you
psat0
Jul 14, 1:34am
Regarding entry #42
The water drop wtih the recycle arrows is getting good feedback. Could you try the design without the turtle body parts? It's looking a little bit like horns at the top.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:30am
Regarding entry #30
We received more positive comments about this design. One suggestion was trying to highlight the words "green collar" so that they stand out a little more.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:24am
Regarding entry #74
Thanks for putting so much effort into all the new designs, and for trying the fern collar effect.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:22am
General Message
I also wanted to let you know...I think $225 is a bit much for a logo design. If you decided to use my design, I'd be more than willing to include an extra design for free! (i.e. flier, business card, etc.) Just a suggestion. :) -Sunrise Studios
SunriseStudios
Jul 13, 11:12am
Regarding entry #57
Sure! No problem. I will have it first thing in the morning! :) Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it. -Sunrise Studios
SunriseStudios
Jul 13, 12:25am
Regarding entry #68
The placement of words and font works nicely. The trees, birds, and wind make sense but it looks too busy.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:17pm
Regarding entry #57
The fern is a nice addition. Could you try putting two ferns together to make a collar? That might look really nice.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:12pm
Regarding entry #66
The colors and elements are very nice but this design will be too complex to reproduce well in some conditions. Thank you for entering it, however.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:10pm
Regarding entry #50
This one is fun! Could you try it with green rather than blue? Thank you.
psat0
Jul 12, 10:56pm
Regarding entry #51
Thank you for this entry. Could you try this same design in a more vibrant blues and greens? Would like to see how that would look.
psat0
Jul 12, 10:55pm
Regarding entry #59
Here is another Design. A Tiki God is almost typical of Hawaii. I tried to incorporate the 3 main Energy sources: water, Sun and Wind. I also thought the Recycle symbol would be a nice addition. This Logo doesn't really need to have the Hawaii Green Collar Energy text next to it, once it's out there. People could easily recognize the Tiki God as yours.
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 9:24pm
Regarding entry #42
I will post it latter, I am as well working on something else
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 3:39pm
Regarding entry #42
Sure i can do that!
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 3:07pm
Regarding entry #10
So glad to hear it! FYI, I have not gone away; I am in watching and thinking mode as the deadline nears. :)
JanCan
Jul 8, 3:02pm
Regarding entry #10
This design is still one of our favorites.
psat0
Jul 8, 2:56pm
Regarding entry #42
This is nice. We like the use of colors. We'd like to see if you could make the "Hawai'i" part smaller and emphasize the GREEN COLLAR part of the name. Thank you.
psat0
Jul 8, 2:54pm
Regarding entry #35
Ok i will try different tree. Thanks for your reply.
vsalian
Jul 8, 4:53am
Regarding entry #36
Sure I can try another tex style! I will post something tonight!
fmgraphics
Jul 7, 2:43pm
Regarding entry #36
Thank you for your designs! The combination of the water drop and turtle is nice (especially with the recycle arrows). The text style doesn't work as well. Could you try some other styles? The windmill design is nice as well.
psat0
Jul 7, 2:37pm
Regarding entry #39
The free-form feel of the text is nice. It would be a closer fit for us without the pineapple and the circles but instead having something more Hawaiian. Ferns?
psat0
Jul 7, 2:33pm
Regarding entry #35
Thanks for your design. The movement of air is nice. Could you try a different set of trees? The coconut image is a bit overused as a symbol for Hawaii.
psat0
Jul 7, 2:27pm
Regarding entry #31
Aloha, One of committee members commented that the leaves may be too busy now. Could you try reducing the tapa effect . . . maybe just on one of the leaves? Or perhaps in the collar only. thanks
psat0
Jul 7, 2:25pm
Regarding entry #28
requirement has been met
tiphys
Jul 6, 4:27pm
Regarding entry #29
thank you for your feed back i think that turtle represent ecologist and wisdom, so teenager could be love that (young adults love also hello kitty :-)
aandrea
Jul 6, 4:03am
Regarding entry #32
This is a nice addition of Hawaiian elements into the design.
psat0
Jul 5, 10:02pm
Regarding entry #31
Nice addition of tapa prints in the leaves!
psat0
Jul 5, 10:00pm
Regarding entry #30
This is nice. It definitely has a more Hawaiian feel to it. Nice use of the color green.
psat0
Jul 5, 9:59pm
Regarding entry #28
This has a nice feel to it. I like the symbolism. Could you try making the arrow go just one way vs both ways? Maybe from left to right?
psat0
Jul 5, 9:58pm
Regarding entry #29
Thank you for your entry. The text is nice but I think the illustration is more fitting for young children than for our target age group (young adults).
psat0
Jul 5, 9:57pm
Regarding entry #20
Here's one of the better websites. Please take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks
psat0
Jul 5, 3:33am
Regarding entry #14
Haven't thought of a favorite yet but I tried to find a website with good ideas re native Hawaiian species. Pls take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks!
psat0
Jul 5, 3:29am
Regarding entry #20
The changing shade of green in the collar is nice. The coconut tree is not the best symbol for Hawai`i as it is found in many other tropical places. Will try to find a resource for Hawaiian plant suggestions.
psat0
Jul 5, 3:02am
Regarding entry #24
This design is also strong. I like the colors used for the words. It would fit more closely with our goals if it had a connection to Hawaii and the culture here.
psat0
Jul 5, 2:58am
Regarding entry #17
I feel like it should go sideways and be more connected to the words but can't really visualize it yet.
psat0
Jul 5, 2:54am
Regarding entry #23
This is a great design! It's very strong. The one thing that is a bit missing is a connection to Hawai'i. One thought: Could there be an element of a kapa (tapa) design somewhere without making this too busy?
psat0
Jul 5, 2:52am
Regarding entry #17
Yes I could try to do that is there a way you would like to see the lei's position so I can get it more like you would prefer?
jennj28
Jul 3, 12:22pm
Regarding entry #14
Sure I Would be happy to try another flower do you have any particular favorites and I will incorporate one of those instead. :)
jennj28
Jul 3, 12:21pm
Regarding entry #3
Then, I`ll do it better next time!
gratziela
Jul 3, 9:21am
Regarding entry #10
JanCan
Jul 3, 8:37am
Regarding entry #14
This has a strong design element with the green curves. I like it! Could you try it with a different flower, though? The hibiscus is a bit overused. Thank you.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:17am
Regarding entry #17
Thanks for this entry. I like the lei idea. Wondering if you could try to play with the shape a little bit; perhaps have the lei more integrated with the words? Just a thought.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:14am
Regarding entry #13
Thanks for giving this concept a try! I think it has potential. It's a bit "busy" as is and may not reproduce well but I think you're on a good track.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:12am
Regarding entry #7
Hmmm I see some other people are already working on the Lei collar...they like the Idea I guess. I will come up with something else then....
fmgraphics
Jul 2, 9:34pm
Regarding entry #13
err.. that is, smaller foliage and flowers. sigh.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:35pm
Regarding entry #13
The lei is not actually illustrated as yet - just pitched together for a concept proof. It it also a bit "chunky" and needs to have smaller foliage and leaves.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:27pm
Regarding entry #10
I like the placement of words and colors. Thanks for tweaking the design!
psat0
Jul 2, 2:10pm
Regarding entry #11
Thank you for your entry. This is a nice design. I think we want to steer away from the hibiscus as it is overused and is not a national symbol.
psat0
Jul 2, 2:09pm
Regarding entry #7
Sure I Can give it a try :)
fmgraphics
Jul 2, 12:23pm
Regarding entry #9
JanCan
Jul 2, 3:33am
Regarding entry #5
I will post a proof with a lei later today. :) Thanks!
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:38am
Regarding entry #8
Thanks! And yep, I will move Hawai'i to the right and post today.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:37am
Regarding entry #5
This is nice, too. Do you think you could try using a lei design as a type of collar?
psat0
Jul 2, 2:35am
Regarding entry #8
Very clever idea! This could work very nicely. Could you try it with the word Hawai'i on the right side?
psat0
Jul 2, 2:33am
Regarding entry #7
The collar idea is nice. Because Hawaii is more laid back than a lot of places, I wonder if you could modify the collar to look more like a lei.
psat0
Jul 2, 2:32am
Regarding entry #4
This is a nice layout. Thanks!
psat0
Jul 2, 2:31am
Regarding entry #2
Yes I realized that. I will work on something else and post it here. Thank you for the Fb
fmgraphics
Jul 1, 9:57pm
Regarding entry #2
Thank you for your entry. The hibiscus tends to be a bit overused so we'd like to see something more unique to our program on green careers.
psat0
Jul 1, 3:13pm
Regarding entry #3
Thanks for your entry. The palm tree does represent the things you mentioned, however the design doesn't deliver the message we seek regarding green jobs/careers.
psat0
Jul 1, 3:10pm
Regarding entry #1
Sure! I will submit some new designs over the next couple of days. Thanks for the feedback!
JanCan
Jun 30, 9:36pm
Regarding entry #1
Thank you for your entry! We agree that the kalo leaf is a great symbol. Could you try a design where the word "Hawai'i" is not so bold as there are many groups starting with that word. We would like something that makes our group stand out.
Regarding entry #95
This, I like
Memili
Jul 18, 4:10pm
Regarding entry #99
Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:50pm
Regarding entry #99
Sorry Wrong spot...lol, It was meant for the Collar Style logo!
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:49pm
Regarding entry #99
Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).
fmgraphics
Jul 17, 9:46pm
Regarding entry #95
Fire meets water
Memili
Jul 17, 6:54pm
General Message
Mahalo (thank you) to everyone who submitted designs to this competition. The creativity we've seen is tremendous. We will convene our committee and come to a decision in a few days. Aloha
psat0
Jul 17, 4:03pm
Regarding entry #102
I am glad you like the logo. I submitted a version with the flipped arrow.
pentacreative
Jul 17, 10:20am
General Message
The client has extended the contest
guru
Jul 16, 5:41pm
Regarding entry #42
Sure I posted an Update on the Board, you can check it out. I actually posted 3 different kinds. Let me know what you think about them. Thank you for the feedback!
fmgraphics
Jul 15, 9:37pm
Regarding entry #102
Great choice of colors! Would you mind flipping the arrow in hawai'i so that it turns the opposite way, still with the skinny part at the top?
psat0
Jul 15, 8:11pm
Regarding entry #51
Just posted a bolder look.
pentacreative
Jul 15, 11:12am
Regarding entry #50
Just posted a new version
pentacreative
Jul 15, 11:11am
Regarding entry #89
I feel happy that you liked Logo #89, thanks a lot.
vsalian
Jul 15, 9:07am
Regarding entry #89
This is very nice! Thank you for offering this design.
psat0
Jul 15, 3:39am
Regarding entry #74
Is there anything you would suggest I change?
SunriseStudios
Jul 14, 10:07am
Regarding entry #68
Making few changes and sending
vsalian
Jul 14, 4:15am
Regarding entry #77
This is pretty cool! Thank you.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:38am
Regarding entry #10
One minor comment is changing the glottal stop in Hawai'i to be the same color as the word. And maybe trying a version with brown instead of the purplish color just to see what that would look like. thank you
psat0
Jul 14, 1:34am
Regarding entry #42
The water drop wtih the recycle arrows is getting good feedback. Could you try the design without the turtle body parts? It's looking a little bit like horns at the top.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:30am
Regarding entry #30
We received more positive comments about this design. One suggestion was trying to highlight the words "green collar" so that they stand out a little more.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:24am
Regarding entry #74
Thanks for putting so much effort into all the new designs, and for trying the fern collar effect.
psat0
Jul 14, 1:22am
General Message
I also wanted to let you know...I think $225 is a bit much for a logo design. If you decided to use my design, I'd be more than willing to include an extra design for free! (i.e. flier, business card, etc.) Just a suggestion. :) -Sunrise Studios
SunriseStudios
Jul 13, 11:12am
Regarding entry #57
Sure! No problem. I will have it first thing in the morning! :) Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it. -Sunrise Studios
SunriseStudios
Jul 13, 12:25am
Regarding entry #68
The placement of words and font works nicely. The trees, birds, and wind make sense but it looks too busy.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:17pm
Regarding entry #57
The fern is a nice addition. Could you try putting two ferns together to make a collar? That might look really nice.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:12pm
Regarding entry #66
The colors and elements are very nice but this design will be too complex to reproduce well in some conditions. Thank you for entering it, however.
psat0
Jul 12, 11:10pm
Regarding entry #50
This one is fun! Could you try it with green rather than blue? Thank you.
psat0
Jul 12, 10:56pm
Regarding entry #51
Thank you for this entry. Could you try this same design in a more vibrant blues and greens? Would like to see how that would look.
psat0
Jul 12, 10:55pm
Regarding entry #59
Here is another Design. A Tiki God is almost typical of Hawaii. I tried to incorporate the 3 main Energy sources: water, Sun and Wind. I also thought the Recycle symbol would be a nice addition. This Logo doesn't really need to have the Hawaii Green Collar Energy text next to it, once it's out there. People could easily recognize the Tiki God as yours.
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 9:24pm
Regarding entry #42
I will post it latter, I am as well working on something else
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 3:39pm
Regarding entry #42
Sure i can do that!
fmgraphics
Jul 8, 3:07pm
Regarding entry #10
So glad to hear it! FYI, I have not gone away; I am in watching and thinking mode as the deadline nears. :)
JanCan
Jul 8, 3:02pm
Regarding entry #10
This design is still one of our favorites.
psat0
Jul 8, 2:56pm
Regarding entry #42
This is nice. We like the use of colors. We'd like to see if you could make the "Hawai'i" part smaller and emphasize the GREEN COLLAR part of the name. Thank you.
psat0
Jul 8, 2:54pm
Regarding entry #35
Ok i will try different tree. Thanks for your reply.
vsalian
Jul 8, 4:53am
Regarding entry #36
Sure I can try another tex style! I will post something tonight!
fmgraphics
Jul 7, 2:43pm
Regarding entry #36
Thank you for your designs! The combination of the water drop and turtle is nice (especially with the recycle arrows). The text style doesn't work as well. Could you try some other styles? The windmill design is nice as well.
psat0
Jul 7, 2:37pm
Regarding entry #39
The free-form feel of the text is nice. It would be a closer fit for us without the pineapple and the circles but instead having something more Hawaiian. Ferns?
psat0
Jul 7, 2:33pm
Regarding entry #35
Thanks for your design. The movement of air is nice. Could you try a different set of trees? The coconut image is a bit overused as a symbol for Hawaii.
psat0
Jul 7, 2:27pm
Regarding entry #31
Aloha, One of committee members commented that the leaves may be too busy now. Could you try reducing the tapa effect . . . maybe just on one of the leaves? Or perhaps in the collar only. thanks
psat0
Jul 7, 2:25pm
Regarding entry #28
requirement has been met
tiphys
Jul 6, 4:27pm
Regarding entry #29
thank you for your feed back i think that turtle represent ecologist and wisdom, so teenager could be love that (young adults love also hello kitty :-)
aandrea
Jul 6, 4:03am
Regarding entry #32
This is a nice addition of Hawaiian elements into the design.
psat0
Jul 5, 10:02pm
Regarding entry #31
Nice addition of tapa prints in the leaves!
psat0
Jul 5, 10:00pm
Regarding entry #30
This is nice. It definitely has a more Hawaiian feel to it. Nice use of the color green.
psat0
Jul 5, 9:59pm
Regarding entry #28
This has a nice feel to it. I like the symbolism. Could you try making the arrow go just one way vs both ways? Maybe from left to right?
psat0
Jul 5, 9:58pm
Regarding entry #29
Thank you for your entry. The text is nice but I think the illustration is more fitting for young children than for our target age group (young adults).
psat0
Jul 5, 9:57pm
Regarding entry #20
Here's one of the better websites. Please take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks
psat0
Jul 5, 3:33am
Regarding entry #14
Haven't thought of a favorite yet but I tried to find a website with good ideas re native Hawaiian species. Pls take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks!
psat0
Jul 5, 3:29am
Regarding entry #20
The changing shade of green in the collar is nice. The coconut tree is not the best symbol for Hawai`i as it is found in many other tropical places. Will try to find a resource for Hawaiian plant suggestions.
psat0
Jul 5, 3:02am
Regarding entry #24
This design is also strong. I like the colors used for the words. It would fit more closely with our goals if it had a connection to Hawaii and the culture here.
psat0
Jul 5, 2:58am
Regarding entry #17
I feel like it should go sideways and be more connected to the words but can't really visualize it yet.
psat0
Jul 5, 2:54am
Regarding entry #23
This is a great design! It's very strong. The one thing that is a bit missing is a connection to Hawai'i. One thought: Could there be an element of a kapa (tapa) design somewhere without making this too busy?
psat0
Jul 5, 2:52am
Regarding entry #17
Yes I could try to do that is there a way you would like to see the lei's position so I can get it more like you would prefer?
jennj28
Jul 3, 12:22pm
Regarding entry #14
Sure I Would be happy to try another flower do you have any particular favorites and I will incorporate one of those instead. :)
jennj28
Jul 3, 12:21pm
Regarding entry #3
Then, I`ll do it better next time!
gratziela
Jul 3, 9:21am
Regarding entry #10
JanCan
Jul 3, 8:37am
Regarding entry #14
This has a strong design element with the green curves. I like it! Could you try it with a different flower, though? The hibiscus is a bit overused. Thank you.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:17am
Regarding entry #17
Thanks for this entry. I like the lei idea. Wondering if you could try to play with the shape a little bit; perhaps have the lei more integrated with the words? Just a thought.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:14am
Regarding entry #13
Thanks for giving this concept a try! I think it has potential. It's a bit "busy" as is and may not reproduce well but I think you're on a good track.
psat0
Jul 3, 3:12am
Regarding entry #7
Hmmm I see some other people are already working on the Lei collar...they like the Idea I guess. I will come up with something else then....
fmgraphics
Jul 2, 9:34pm
Regarding entry #13
err.. that is, smaller foliage and flowers. sigh.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:35pm
Regarding entry #13
The lei is not actually illustrated as yet - just pitched together for a concept proof. It it also a bit "chunky" and needs to have smaller foliage and leaves.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:27pm
Regarding entry #10
I like the placement of words and colors. Thanks for tweaking the design!
psat0
Jul 2, 2:10pm
Regarding entry #11
Thank you for your entry. This is a nice design. I think we want to steer away from the hibiscus as it is overused and is not a national symbol.
psat0
Jul 2, 2:09pm
Regarding entry #7
Sure I Can give it a try :)
fmgraphics
Jul 2, 12:23pm
Regarding entry #9
JanCan
Jul 2, 3:33am
Regarding entry #5
I will post a proof with a lei later today. :) Thanks!
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:38am
Regarding entry #8
Thanks! And yep, I will move Hawai'i to the right and post today.
JanCan
Jul 2, 2:37am
Regarding entry #5
This is nice, too. Do you think you could try using a lei design as a type of collar?
psat0
Jul 2, 2:35am
Regarding entry #8
Very clever idea! This could work very nicely. Could you try it with the word Hawai'i on the right side?
psat0
Jul 2, 2:33am
Regarding entry #7
The collar idea is nice. Because Hawaii is more laid back than a lot of places, I wonder if you could modify the collar to look more like a lei.
psat0
Jul 2, 2:32am
Regarding entry #4
This is a nice layout. Thanks!
psat0
Jul 2, 2:31am
Regarding entry #2
Yes I realized that. I will work on something else and post it here. Thank you for the Fb
fmgraphics
Jul 1, 9:57pm
Regarding entry #2
Thank you for your entry. The hibiscus tends to be a bit overused so we'd like to see something more unique to our program on green careers.
psat0
Jul 1, 3:13pm
Regarding entry #3
Thanks for your entry. The palm tree does represent the things you mentioned, however the design doesn't deliver the message we seek regarding green jobs/careers.
psat0
Jul 1, 3:10pm
Regarding entry #1
Sure! I will submit some new designs over the next couple of days. Thanks for the feedback!
JanCan
Jun 30, 9:36pm
Regarding entry #1
Thank you for your entry! We agree that the kalo leaf is a great symbol. Could you try a design where the word "Hawai'i" is not so bold as there are many groups starting with that word. We would like something that makes our group stand out.
psat0
Jun 30, 8:57pm