Logo needed for new program  

from psat0 Jul 5, 9:57pm

Thank you for your entry. The text is nice but I think the illustration is more fitting for young children than for our target age group (young adults).

from aandrea Jul 6, 4:03am

thank you for your feed back i think that turtle represent ecologist and wisdom, so teenager could be love that (young adults love also hello kitty :-)

from psat0 Jul 1, 3:10pm

Thanks for your entry. The palm tree does represent the things you mentioned, however the design doesn't deliver the message we seek regarding green jobs/careers.

from gratziela Jul 3, 9:21am

Then, I`ll do it better next time!

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:09pm

Thank you for your entry. This is a nice design. I think we want to steer away from the hibiscus as it is overused and is not a national symbol.

from psat0 Jun 30, 8:57pm

Thank you for your entry! We agree that the kalo leaf is a great symbol. Could you try a design where the word "Hawai'i" is not so bold as there are many groups starting with that word. We would like something that makes our group stand out.

from JanCan Jun 30, 9:36pm

Sure! I will submit some new designs over the next couple of days. Thanks for the feedback!

from psat0 Jul 5, 2:52am

This is a great design! It's very strong. The one thing that is a bit missing is a connection to Hawai'i. One thought: Could there be an element of a kapa (tapa) design somewhere without making this too busy?

from psat0 Jul 12, 10:55pm

Thank you for this entry. Could you try this same design in a more vibrant blues and greens? Would like to see how that would look.

from pentacreative Jul 15, 11:12am

Just posted a bolder look.

from psat0 Jul 1, 3:13pm

Thank you for your entry. The hibiscus tends to be a bit overused so we'd like to see something more unique to our program on green careers.

from fmgraphics Jul 1, 9:57pm

Yes I realized that. I will work on something else and post it here. Thank you for the Fb

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:10pm

I like the placement of words and colors. Thanks for tweaking the design!

from JanCan Jul 3, 8:37am

from psat0 Jul 8, 2:56pm

This design is still one of our favorites.

from JanCan Jul 8, 3:02pm

So glad to hear it! FYI, I have not gone away; I am in watching and thinking mode as the deadline nears. :)

from psat0 Jul 14, 1:34am

One minor comment is changing the glottal stop in Hawai'i to be the same color as the word. And maybe trying a version with brown instead of the purplish color just to see what that would look like. thank you

from psat0 Jul 3, 3:17am

This has a strong design element with the green curves. I like it! Could you try it with a different flower, though? The hibiscus is a bit overused. Thank you.

from jennj28 Jul 3, 12:21pm

Sure I Would be happy to try another flower do you have any particular favorites and I will incorporate one of those instead. :)

from psat0 Jul 5, 3:29am

Haven't thought of a favorite yet but I tried to find a website with good ideas re native Hawaiian species. Pls take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks!

from psat0 Jul 12, 10:56pm

This one is fun! Could you try it with green rather than blue? Thank you.

from pentacreative Jul 15, 11:11am

Just posted a new version

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:31am

This is a nice layout. Thanks!

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:35am

This is nice, too. Do you think you could try using a lei design as a type of collar?

from JanCan Jul 2, 2:38am

I will post a proof with a lei later today. :) Thanks!

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:32am

The collar idea is nice. Because Hawaii is more laid back than a lot of places, I wonder if you could modify the collar to look more like a lei.

from fmgraphics Jul 2, 12:23pm

Sure I Can give it a try :)

from fmgraphics Jul 2, 9:34pm

Hmmm I see some other people are already working on the Lei collar...they like the Idea I guess. I will come up with something else then....

from JanCan Jul 2, 2:27pm

The lei is not actually illustrated as yet - just pitched together for a concept proof. It it also a bit "chunky" and needs to have smaller foliage and leaves.

from JanCan Jul 2, 2:35pm

err.. that is, smaller foliage and flowers. sigh.

from psat0 Jul 3, 3:12am

Thanks for giving this concept a try! I think it has potential. It's a bit "busy" as is and may not reproduce well but I think you're on a good track.

from psat0 Jul 5, 2:58am

This design is also strong. I like the colors used for the words. It would fit more closely with our goals if it had a connection to Hawaii and the culture here.

from psat0 Jul 5, 9:58pm

This has a nice feel to it. I like the symbolism. Could you try making the arrow go just one way vs both ways? Maybe from left to right?

from tiphys Jul 6, 4:27pm

requirement has been met

from psat0 Jul 7, 2:27pm

Thanks for your design. The movement of air is nice. Could you try a different set of trees? The coconut image is a bit overused as a symbol for Hawaii.

from vsalian Jul 8, 4:53am

Ok i will try different tree. Thanks for your reply.

from psat0 Jul 7, 2:37pm

Thank you for your designs! The combination of the water drop and turtle is nice (especially with the recycle arrows). The text style doesn't work as well. Could you try some other styles? The windmill design is nice as well.

from fmgraphics Jul 7, 2:43pm

Sure I can try another tex style! I will post something tonight!

from psat0 Jul 7, 2:33pm

The free-form feel of the text is nice. It would be a closer fit for us without the pineapple and the circles but instead having something more Hawaiian. Ferns?

from psat0 Jul 8, 2:54pm

This is nice. We like the use of colors. We'd like to see if you could make the "Hawai'i" part smaller and emphasize the GREEN COLLAR part of the name. Thank you.

from fmgraphics Jul 8, 3:07pm

Sure i can do that!

from fmgraphics Jul 8, 3:39pm

I will post it latter, I am as well working on something else

from psat0 Jul 14, 1:30am

The water drop wtih the recycle arrows is getting good feedback. Could you try the design without the turtle body parts? It's looking a little bit like horns at the top.

from fmgraphics Jul 15, 9:37pm

Sure I posted an Update on the Board, you can check it out. I actually posted 3 different kinds. Let me know what you think about them. Thank you for the feedback!

from psat0 Jul 12, 11:12pm

The fern is a nice addition. Could you try putting two ferns together to make a collar? That might look really nice.

from SunriseStudios Jul 13, 12:25am

Sure! No problem. I will have it first thing in the morning! :) Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it. -Sunrise Studios

from fmgraphics Jul 8, 9:24pm

Here is another Design. A Tiki God is almost typical of Hawaii. I tried to incorporate the 3 main Energy sources: water, Sun and Wind. I also thought the Recycle symbol would be a nice addition. This Logo doesn't really need to have the Hawaii Green Collar Energy text next to it, once it's out there. People could easily recognize the Tiki God as yours.

from psat0 Jul 12, 11:10pm

The colors and elements are very nice but this design will be too complex to reproduce well in some conditions. Thank you for entering it, however.

from Memili Jul 17, 6:54pm

Fire meets water

from Memili Jul 18, 4:10pm

This, I like

from fmgraphics Jul 17, 9:46pm

Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).

from fmgraphics Jul 17, 9:49pm

Sorry Wrong spot...lol, It was meant for the Collar Style logo!

from fmgraphics Jul 17, 9:50pm

Well, I am not the customer but I must say this is really nice :).

from psat0 Jul 2, 2:33am

Very clever idea! This could work very nicely. Could you try it with the word Hawai'i on the right side?

from JanCan Jul 2, 2:37am

Thanks! And yep, I will move Hawai'i to the right and post today.

from JanCan Jul 2, 3:33am

from psat0 Jul 3, 3:14am

Thanks for this entry. I like the lei idea. Wondering if you could try to play with the shape a little bit; perhaps have the lei more integrated with the words? Just a thought.

from jennj28 Jul 3, 12:22pm

Yes I could try to do that is there a way you would like to see the lei's position so I can get it more like you would prefer?

from psat0 Jul 5, 2:54am

I feel like it should go sideways and be more connected to the words but can't really visualize it yet.

from psat0 Jul 5, 3:02am

The changing shade of green in the collar is nice. The coconut tree is not the best symbol for Hawai`i as it is found in many other tropical places. Will try to find a resource for Hawaiian plant suggestions.

from psat0 Jul 5, 3:33am

Here's one of the better websites. Please take a look: http://eeinhawaii.blogspot.com/search/label/endangered%20species Thanks

from psat0 Jul 5, 10:00pm

Nice addition of tapa prints in the leaves!

from psat0 Jul 7, 2:25pm

Aloha, One of committee members commented that the leaves may be too busy now. Could you try reducing the tapa effect . . . maybe just on one of the leaves? Or perhaps in the collar only. thanks

from psat0 Jul 5, 10:02pm

This is a nice addition of Hawaiian elements into the design.

from psat0 Jul 14, 1:22am

Thanks for putting so much effort into all the new designs, and for trying the fern collar effect.

from SunriseStudios Jul 14, 10:07am

Is there anything you would suggest I change?

from psat0 Jul 14, 1:38am

This is pretty cool! Thank you.

from psat0 Jul 15, 8:11pm

Great choice of colors! Would you mind flipping the arrow in hawai'i so that it turns the opposite way, still with the skinny part at the top?

from pentacreative Jul 17, 10:20am

I am glad you like the logo. I submitted a version with the flipped arrow.

from psat0 Jul 12, 11:17pm

The placement of words and font works nicely. The trees, birds, and wind make sense but it looks too busy.

from vsalian Jul 14, 4:15am

Making few changes and sending

from psat0 Jul 15, 3:39am

This is very nice! Thank you for offering this design.

from vsalian Jul 15, 9:07am

I feel happy that you liked Logo #89, thanks a lot.