Door hangers for local church  

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:10pm

I lilke the simplicity to me it contributes to its readability. The phrase "One church teaching the truth from the Bible should read One church, two languages, teaching... or delete "One church" and begin with Teaching the truth... Someone suggested doing one side in english and one side in spanish. I like that idea. Is it possible to reduce the size of the map and the wording on the front to so without sacrificing simpliciy and readability?

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:17pm

I like the 1 book, chapter and verse at a time set up but it needs clarification that it refers to the teaching of the Bible. Someone suggested doing one side in english and one side in spanish. I like that idea. Is it possible to reduce put the map and address on the front without sacrificing simpliciy and readability?

from ljdaniels Sep 21, 8:21am

went with the orange/tan color scheme as i feel that it provides more of a warm and welcoming feeling.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:59pm

I like what you did with lake street. I like that it is easily readable. I also like the revisions with the praying hands and wording around the corner rather than around the hole. Also considering one designers suggestion to do one side in english and other identical but in spanish.

from ljdaniels Sep 25, 6:00pm

not a problem, im glad you like the revisions. i can do another mock up for you in spanish for you to see if you wish.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:32pm

Although I like the background picture it overpowers the wording making it difficult to read at a quick glance. The 1 book, chapter, verse at a time set up is good but needs clarification that it refers to the teaching. I prefer a street map as opposed to a satellite map. Finally, one of the designers suggested one side in english and one in spanish. I like that idea as long as it is not too cluttered.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:36pm

I really like the simplicity and readability. One of the designers suggested one side in english and one in spanish. I like that idea as long as it is not too cluttered.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:39pm

I like simplicity, readability and to the point. I also like the idea of the reverse side in spanish. I would prefer a brighter, but not too bright, color, perhaps with blue tomes.

from burgess1408 Sep 21, 4:46pm

#10 design is same as #9. My error. Standard 3.50"x8.50". Design is easy to read and to the point. If reverse printing is necessary, would suggest same design but in Spanish.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:43pm

I like your revisions.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:42pm

I like this design format even better than your first.

from caviart Sep 23, 2:56am

bleu color choosen so as to attract people's attention. Cool and calmly. curly effect is to intend people's attention of a verso. Neat fonts for readability. Simple non aggressive yet persuasive designs(cross pattern fade out and drop shadow effect on text)

from caviart Sep 23, 2:58am

brown color is for a serious and responsible feeling yet not aggresive. neat font choice for readability. good contrast color of front n back. neat design(cross pattern fade out)

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 4:52pm

Much of the wording blends in with the background making it difficult to read.

from LGDesigns Sep 30, 2:45pm

This design offers golden soft hues with a unique font used for Lake Street Fellowship,

from jagpreetsingh Sep 24, 10:37am

since its a door hanger, I have kept all the important information at the front as the chances of rear part being ingored are high. a big map is necessary for people to know the surrounding areas too. comments/suggestions welcome.

from DBarr1 Sep 25, 5:04pm

To me the message is lost in the backgound. It seems over powering to me.

from brooky1065 Sep 25, 5:19pm

considering it is a door hanger, i think it needs to stand out without immediately saying its about religion? Thanks for your feedback though

from ljdaniels Sep 25, 6:31pm

heres the spanish edit i said iw ould do for you. I have to play around a little bit to make it all fit, but unfortunately I couldnt find room for the map. please let me know if ive made any mistakes in translating the spanish so i can amend them for you.

from ljdaniels Sep 30, 4:05pm

used the prova template for this one, and with a little rearrangement to the previous spanish hanger, i have also managed to fit the map on both sides for you. once again please dont hesitate to ask for any changes.

from DBarr1 Oct 20, 10:22am

"verse en momento en" should be changed to "verso a la vez" Rest of Spanish loks good.

from ljdaniels Oct 20, 10:38am

not a problem, will have those amendments made and up for you to take a look at by tommorow.

from Ynga Oct 2, 7:45am

Message: "You don't have to try to open Lake Street Fellowship door like you do now - it's already open". Welcoming warm mood, composed using positive colours, associations with aura and holiness.

from ljdaniels Oct 21, 1:53am

further spanish emendments have been made accordingly